Seismoman

Last night an earthquake hit our beloved city Delhi , but only schools and colleges were damaged . Do you have any idea who was behind this miracle ? Seismoman is the answer . He is our new beloved superhero. Only because of him we don't any college or school left in our city . No one was injured as earthquake hit our area during evening hours . Seismoman is working among us from a very long period of time but this incident forced him to come out of his hidden world. Now he is between among us . We don't know his true identity or powers but he has some kind of control over seismic activity. That's why he is Seismoman. Now , you don't have to hide under a table or go to a ground you just have to shout " SEISMOMAN" and he will be there for you . This guy has the potential to remove some books and courses like 'Disaster management' from our life. He is a man army. We are glad that he is on our side. So open your arms for our buddy ' Seismoman ' .






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  1. You present very nicely. You explained it well

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  2. It's Do you have any idea you wrote do ho have . please work on your spelling mistake and tenses.Otherwise all content was good easily to understand .

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    1. Okay , I will take care of that.


      Varsha please work on your sentence structure , capitalization , spatial errors , tenses , right use of prepositions and punctuation marks 😊

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  3. Thank you Bhawna but could you be more specific ?

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  4. No there aren't any several mistakes. Check again

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  5. Don't write same thing thrice.

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