Escape from the carnival of horrors

 The story set up somewhere where there are few friends and they are playing somethings and they have nothing to do so they go to a place that is very less crowded. Near to the place they were  playing , the place seems haunted but still they went there as they have nothing interesting to do.

Comments

  1. You wrote well .

    Areas of improvement :
    I think you have to work on punctuation mark.

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